You told me that you loved me
I felt like I was shot into orbit
I was over he moon in love with you
And blessed that you loved me too
Then your jagged edges started to show
You behaved like a petulant toddler
I fell back down to earth
(50 words)
Written for Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt, where the word is “orbit” in exactly 50 words.Also for these daily prompts: Ragtag Daily Prompt (jagged), Fandango’s One Word Challenge (petulant), and MSA Storytime (toddler).
Well that’s bittersweet!
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Yep.
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This is brilliant fandango! I love it! ❤
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Thanks, Carol Anne.
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Down to earth with quite a bump!
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Not a smooth landing.
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So sad. Gosh, life and love can be tragic. Nicely written.
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Thanks.
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Nice one, Fandango and I like image too.
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Thank you.
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The highs and lows of love. Nice one Fandango.
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And love comes crashing down… wonderfully written!
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Thanks, Leigha.
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You’re welcome.
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I would walk to the moon. Just to bring you back the stars
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