Writer’s Workshop — Little Boy Lost

For his Writer’s Workshop this week, John Holton gives us six writing prompts and we are tasked with choosing one of the prompts (or as many as we want) and writing a post that addresses that (or those) prompt(s). I chose to use this prompt: Tell us about a time you got lost while going somewhere.

We had moved to the area a month earlier, so we hadn’t lived there very long. I was in the first grade, maybe six or seven years old. One of the kids in my class that I became friendly with, Dennis, asked me if I wanted to go to his house after school to play.

Dennis lived just on the other side of the woods, not that far from my own home, really. Just in the opposite direction from the school. I knew how to get home from my usual starting point, the school, but now starting from Dennis’ home, I realized that I was hopelessly lost.

It was dusk when I left Dennis’ home, and the rapidly approaching darkness, intensified by the canopy of the trees surrounding the path through the woods, seemed to be enveloping me. It was getting cold, too, and I could feel a chill passing through my light jacket, reaching deep inside to my very core.

The branches, some still with the dying autumn leaves clinging to them, were reaching down toward me like the gray, bony arms of an army of skeletons. Grabbing, pulling.

I heard sounds, but I couldn’t be sure if they were the sounds of my own footfalls or if someone — or something — was lurking from within the trees, following me, waiting for just the right moment to pounce.

I had never been so scared in my young life. Why had I done this? I knew I was supposed to go right home after school. But I was new to this school and my best friend — my only friend, actually — had invited him to come over and play after school.

I didn’t know whether to continue in the direction I’d been walking, or to turn around and head back toward my friend’s house. But if I did turn around, would I even be able to find my way back there again?

I came across a large, downed tree branch along the side of the path. Unsure about whether I should move ahead or turn back, I sat down on the branch. It was dark and it was cold. Fear was starting to overwhelm me and I began to cry.

“Hey kid,” I heard a voice say. It startled me. “Are you okay?” he asked.

“I’m lost,” I said between sobs, looking up at the older boy, who must have been a sixth grader.

“Where do you live?”

I gave the older kid my address; my parents had made me memorize it. “But if you take me back to my school, I can find my way home from there.”

The older boy grabbed my hand and pulled me up. “I know where your house is,” he said. “I’ll take you home.”

I didn’t know whether to feel relieved or to be wary. “Don’t talk to strangers,” my parents had warned me countless times. But in this case, the stranger was, himself, just a kid. Maybe only four or five years older than I was.

The older boy took me straight home to my worried parents, who were so relieved and overjoyed to see me. I was surprised to find my father there, as he normally didn’t get home from work until much later.

They were both crying tears of relief and happiness — even my father. It was the first time I’d ever seen my father cry. My mother couldn’t stop hugging and kissing her little boy, repeating, “Oh thank God, oh thank God” over and over.

The next day, first thing in the morning, the principal’s voice was broadcast over the school’s P.A. system, to be heard in all of the classrooms throughout the building.

“Boys and girls,” she said. “When you leave the school in the afternoons, you must go directly home unless your parents have given you a signed permission slip authorizing you to go somewhere else after school.”

I knew why the principal had made that announcement on that particular morning. But no one in my classroom was looking at me, the new kid. The kid who should have known better.

And when I left school that afternoon, I walked confidently into the woods. The familiar, comforting woods that I knew would lead me straight home.


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#WDYS — Chick Magnet

Alan didn’t particularly like dogs. But he loved girls. And when he passed by a pet store one evening on his way home from work and saw an adorable, furry little puppy in the window, he came up with a plan.

He walked into the pet store and asked the clerk, “How much is that doggie in the window?” It didn’t really matter what the price was, Alan had made up his mind. He bought the dog, a dog carrier, dog food, snacks, toys, the whole nine yards.

Alan brought the dog home, named him Toby, fed him, cleaned up Toby’s messes, and got a rough first night’s sleep. But Alan was bound and determined. So the next day, being a Saturday, Alan put Toby in the carrier, slung the carrier over his shoulders, and took a walk toward the city park.

As soon as he walked out of his apartment building, Toby was doing his magic. He was irresistible and women — and a few men — couldn’t pass Alan and Toby without stopping to pet and fawn all over Toby. And Alan couldn’t have been more pleased.

Yes, Toby was the perfect chick magnet, just as Alan had expected him to be. But what caught Alan by surprise was how, over time, Toby grew up and into the best, most loyal friend Alan could ever have imagined.


Written for Sadje’s What Do You See prompt. Photo credit: Dex Ezekiel @ Unsplash.

SoCS — School Girl Crush

Speaking on the phone to her BFF, Elaine excitedly said, “I met a new guy. He’s in my homeroom and he’s so dreamy. He saw me gazing at him and he smiled back at me and I knew. I just instantly knew.”

“You knew? What did you know?” Megan asked her best friend.

“I knew that he and I are going to be girlfriend-boyfriend, silly,” Elaine said.

“How did you know that?” Megan asked. “Did you talk with him? Does he even know your name?”

“No, not yet,” Elaine admitted, “but I saw how he smiled at me when he saw me staring at him.”

“Yeah, Elaine, it was probably a nervous smile,” Megan said. “You probably freaked him out.”

“No, you’re wrong, Megan,” Elaine said. “You’re just jealous that I met the new boy before you did.”

“I’m not jealous, Elaine. But you haven’t even talked with him yet, so how can you be so sure he’s going to want to be your new boyfriend?”

“I knew you’d react this way, Megan,” Elaine said. “Why do you always have to be such a bitch? You are no longer my best friend. I hate you!” Elaine abruptly ended the call.

Megan sighed. What else is new? she thought.


Written for Linda G. Hill’s Stream of Consciousness Saturday prompt, where the challenge is to use the words “new” and/or “knew.”

Share Your World — 11/7/2022

Share Your World

Before I get started with my response to today’s Share Your World prompt, I just want to say a few words about Melanie, who has been hosting this weekly prompt for at least the past few years. Melanie passed away over the weekend. I have been following Melanie’s blog for a long time and it’s hard to believe she has actually left us. Melanie was quite a character. She was quirky, brutally honest, funny, sad, and lovable. She will be missed.

Di, at Pensitivity101, who has been standing in for Melanie for the past month or so, has graciously agreed to continue to host this weekly prompt in Melanie’s memory.

1. Do you consider friends an extension of your family?

If I think about my immediate family, no. My wife, son, daughter, and grandchildren come first above all friendships. If I think of my extended family, though, there are some that I rarely speak with and some that I really don’t care for. So in that case, I have close friends that I consider to be more family than some actual members of my extended family.

2. Would you confide in a friend more than you would a family member?

My best friend is my wife, and there is no one I would confide in more than her.

3. How long have you known your best friend?

In the case of my wife, who as I mentioned, is my best friend, we met in 1976, so 46 years. I have several other close male friends that I’ve known since before I met my wife, but I don’t live near any of them anymore, so my interactions with them are a lot less frequent.

4. Do you believe distance has a negative effect on friendships?

Yes, I think distance does have a negative effect because there are barriers to getting together and sharing experiences with people who live far away. Telephone calls, letters, emails, cards, and text messages just aren’t the same as physical proximity.

That said, I am grateful for the friendships I have made with people from all around the globe via blogging. I probably feel more of a closeness with many of you who are reading this than I do with some real world friends who I see, talk with, or exchange written communications with much less frequently than I do with many of you.

Sunday Writing Prompt — Lost

He’d walked this path at least a dozen of time before. But suddenly it looked unfamiliar, menacing, treacherous.

It was dusk, and the rapidly approaching darkness, intensified by the canopy of the trees surrounding the path, seemed to be enveloping him. It was getting cold, too, and he could feel a chill passing through his light jacket, reaching deep inside to his very core.

The branches, some still with the dying autumn leaves clinging to them, were reaching down toward him like the gray, bony arms of an army of skeletons. Grabbing, pulling.

He heard sounds, but he couldn’t be sure if they were the sounds of his own footfalls or if someone — or something — was lurking from within the trees, following him, waiting for just the right moment to pounce.

He had never been so scared in his life. Why had he done this? He knew he was supposed to go right home after school. But he was new to this school and his best friend — his only friend, actually — had invited him to come over and play after school.

His friend lived just on the other side of the woods, not that far from his own home, really. Just in the opposite direction from the school. He knew how to get home from his usual starting point, the school, but now he was hopelessly lost.

He didn’t know whether to continue in the direction he’d been walking, or to turn around and head back toward his friend’s house. But if he did turn around, would he even be able to find his way back there again?

He came across a large, downed tree branch along the side of the path. Unsure about whether he should move ahead or turn back, he sat down on the branch. It was dark and it was cold. Fear was starting to overwhelm him and he began to cry.

“Hey kid,” he heard a voice say. It startled him. “Are you okay?”

“I’m lost,” he said between sobs, looking up at the older boy, who must have been a sixth grader.

“Where do you live?”

He gave the older kid his address; his parents had made him memorize it. “But if you take me back to my school, I can find my way home from there.”

The older boy grabbed the younger kid’s hand and pulled him up. “I know where you house is,” he said. “I’ll take you home.”

He didn’t know whether to feel relieved or to be wary. “Don’t talk to strangers,” his parents had warned him countless times. But in this case, the stranger was, himself, just a kid. Maybe only four or five years older than he was.

The older boy took him straight home to his worried parents, who were so relieved and overjoyed to see him. He was surprised to find his father there, as he normally didn’t get home from work until much later.

They were both crying tears of relief and happiness — even his father. It was the first time he’d ever seen his father cry. His mother couldn’t stop hugging and kissing her little boy, repeating “Oh thank God, oh thank God” over and over.

The next day, first thing in the morning, the principal’s voice was broadcast over the school’s P.A. system, to be heard in all of the classrooms throughout the building.

“Boys and girls,” she said. “When you leave the school in the afternoons, you must go directly home unless your parents have given you a signed permission slip authorizing you to go somewhere else after school.”

He knew why the principal had made that announcement on that particular morning. But no one in his classroom was looking at him, the new kid. The kid who should have known better.

And when he left school that afternoon, he walked confidently into the woods. The familiar, comforting woods that he knew would lead him straight home.


Written for the Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Sunday Writing Prompt, where challenge is to write a story from the perspective of the lost person. This was easy for me because I was that lost seven-year old boy in this tale. Photo credit: Alex Smith at Pexels.com