He was like a moth
A moth attracted to light
A light at the end of the tunnel
A tunnel under the canopy of trees
Trees that stretched to the horizon
A horizon on the other side of the pond
A pond with a surface like a mirror
A mirror he cracked when he dove in
In his quest to reach the light
A light that he was attracted to
Attracted to like he was a moth
Written for Sadje’s What Do You See prompt. Photo credit: Casey Horner @ Unsplash.
Lovely! ❤️
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Perfecto!
This poem, given its circularity, is H.O.T!!! (About 360 degrees, I’d say). Awesome work, Fan
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Thanks, Ron. I appreciate you kind words.
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Excellent loop poetry Fandango! Thanks a lot for joining in
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Thanks, Sadje.
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You’re welcome
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Wonderful, full circle 😊
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Thank you, Deb.
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Very nice, Fandango!
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Thanks, Annie.
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Love your set-up here! Beautifully done 🦋
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Thank you, Nancy.
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DVerse Poets is featuring loop poetry for their current prompt. You should link this up!
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I didn’t realize there was a name to what I wrote. I just wrote what occurred to me when I saw the picture.
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Well done wrap around poem! Love the cadence.
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Thanks so much.
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Goes great with the picture
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Thanks.
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great poem fandango! ❤
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Thanks.
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You wrapped this one up nicely!
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Thanks, Leigha.
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You are welcome.
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