
You left me
Broke my heart in two
I built a wall around it
What else was I to do?
Written for Bulbul’s Twenty Words Tuesday prompt, where this week’s word is “wall.”
You left me
Broke my heart in two
I built a wall around it
What else was I to do?
Written for Bulbul’s Twenty Words Tuesday prompt, where this week’s word is “wall.”
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Love this, so much said in my so few words 😄
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Thanks.
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Goes very well with the picture, and the rhyme really works for the sentiment.
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Nicely done Fandango
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re welcome
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Heartbreakingly beautiful! Great take on the prompt
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Thank you, Shweta.
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Your poem makes me sad. Just as intended. Nice job.
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Thanks. It’s a sad story.
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Ow! That was brilliantly sad. I love the picture, though. A great take, Fandango.
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Many people do this after the heart is broken… building walls will never get it healed though.
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