One Minute Fiction — You Can’t Miss It.

“You can’t miss it,” Sally texted the guy she met a few nights ago at the off-campus tavern. “It’s the one with my bicycle chained to the front stairs railing. It’s blue. The bicycle, that is, not the railing. That’s black — the railing. Anyway, look for the blue bicycle with the red wheel reflectors and the wire basket hooked to the handlebars that is chained to the black railing and that’s my house. Seriously, you can’t miss it.”


Written for Cyranny’s One Minute Fiction Challenge.

14 thoughts on “One Minute Fiction — You Can’t Miss It.

  1. newepicauthor July 23, 2021 / 1:11 pm

    I remember that I was going to pick this girl up for a date and she told me that her house was the only one wit Christmas lights up, this was in August.

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    • Fandango July 23, 2021 / 2:51 pm

      Short and sweet is about the best you can do in one minute! 😉

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  2. Sadje July 23, 2021 / 5:07 pm

    I hope he found the place. 😃😂

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  3. Terveen Gill July 23, 2021 / 5:41 pm

    Wow!
    Loved the repetition. Blue and black and red and black again. If he misses it, then he just ain’t worth it. 🙂

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    • Fandango July 23, 2021 / 10:50 pm

      My wife says the same thing about me. Or, more often, “How could you possibly not have seen that?”

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  4. leigha66 August 7, 2021 / 2:34 pm

    Our house is the only one on the block with a sunflower in front of it (a volunteer from the bird seed I think.), but I can say that quickly in one sentence. Ha, ha!

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