Eye Sore

That neon yellow paint on our house
Gives me the chills

It’s so outrageous that it makes me
Want to run for the hills

So I need to head into town
There’s no time to runaround

Some dull gray paint I need to fetch
A color that doesn’t make me want to retch


Written for these daily prompts: MMA Storytime (neon), The Daily Spur (yellow), Word of the Day Challenge (chills), Fandango’s One-Word Challenge (runaround), and Ragtag Daily Prompt (fetch).

10 thoughts on “Eye Sore

  1. Dave Williams June 22, 2021 / 2:01 am

    A fun poem — and a good warning about potential house colors. Thanks for inspiring a smile for me this morning 🙂

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  2. pensitivity101 June 22, 2021 / 5:16 am

    Reminds me of a B&B in Wales. The proprietor wasn’t interested in the one nighters, had to be three or more. We didn’t stop.

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  3. leigha66 July 1, 2021 / 7:41 pm

    There used to be a house in town that was purple… I always heard lots of opinions about it for both sides. Neon yellow would be a bit bright.

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