Weekend Writing Prompt — Over the Moon

You told me that you loved me
I felt like I was shot into orbit
I was over he moon in love with you
And blessed that you loved me too

Then your jagged edges started to show
You behaved like a petulant toddler
I fell back down to earth

(50 words)

Written for Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt, where the word is “orbit” in exactly 50 words.Also for these daily prompts: Ragtag Daily Prompt (jagged), Fandango’s One Word Challenge (petulant), and MSA Storytime (toddler).

15 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Prompt — Over the Moon

  1. leigha66 March 23, 2021 / 2:37 pm

    And love comes crashing down… wonderfully written!

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