“You’re not showing much enthusiasm,” Dan said.
“It’s not that I don’t trust you, Cynthia,” Dan said. “It’s just that you seem so languid. Are you ill?”
“No, I’m not ill, Dan,” Cynthia said, “But I am bored. You’ve been writing and editing that thing for hours and I’ve read draft after draft and I think I’m too close to it to see it for what it is.”
“You want my honest feedback, Dan,” Cynthia said. “Fine, my honest feedback is don’t quit your day job.”
Written for these daily prompts: Ragtag Daily Prompt; (enthusiasm), The Daily Spur (trust), Word of the Day Challenge (popular), Your Daily Word Prompt (languid), Weekly Prompts (close), Daily Addictions (win), and Fandango’s One-Word Challenge (masterpiece).