In Other Words — Give and Take

D0067F8A-28E8-4779-A2A9-356137A8A178Since I met you, you’ve caused me nothing but heartache.

You’ve done almost everything you could to make my heart break.

Now yow want me to take you back when you were no give and all take.

So I hope you’ll understand, since you made my life a total mess,

Why I am telling you no in five lines or less.


Written for the In Other Words prompt from Patricia’s Place. The challenge this week is to write a story or poem of five lines or fewer using the word “heartache.” Photo credit: Pexels@Picabay.

5 thoughts on “In Other Words — Give and Take

  1. Patricia February 17, 2019 / 3:08 pm

    Five lines or less, short and to the point just the way no should be. Thanks for sharing.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Melodie Michelle ❤️ February 18, 2019 / 11:48 am

    I loved it! That was perfection at it finest. Perfect reaction and statement. I was hoping that I could thank you for the exchange of blogs. I’m new at this so anything having too do with web site design, colors, ease of reading or writing technique and the emotions it makes you feel as a reader. Please also comment on my blog site.
    I’m all ready for advice! Thank you and I will do the same for you in return 👌
    My blog is https://rawthoughtsfromchelle.wordpress.com
    Thank you again ✌️

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