There is a lightness to your touch that takes my breath away.
You possess a patience I’ve never experienced from any other.
You have a voracious appetite for knowledge and a crystal clarity to your thinking.
You have an ambition for greatness and you will never settle for anything less.
Nor will I if you will have me.
This post was written for the In Other Words prompt from Patricia’s Place. The challenge this week is to write a story or poem of five lines or fewer using the word “lightness.” Also written for these prompts: Weekly Prompts (patience), Word of the Day Challenge (appetite), Your Daily Word Prompt (clarity), Fandango’s One-Word Challenge (ambition), and Daily Addictions (settle).
Dang, Dango, getting all romantic ❤ Beautiful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah, hard to believe, huh? 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Must be the right phase of the moon 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aw, nice. What a soppy thing you are Fandango. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sometimes, on rare occasions, I can be a little soppy. 😆
LikeLiked by 1 person
and why not. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Felt that! Saw it in the posture, kneeling, in the eyes, soft and warm …
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes! Thank you, Cage, for telling me that you felt it. That means a lot to me.
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤
Aaaaaw! Heart-breaker!
LikeLiked by 1 person
See, I am more sentimental than a lot of people think. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
So beautiful 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Nova.
LikeLike
The last line really brings it all together. Lovely poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a humble approach. I love it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLike
Lovely! A sweetly romantic poem!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Didn’t think I had it in me, did you? 😱
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hidden depths. We all have talent which has not been explored yet. It was really good.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Sadje.
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very gentle, very rich.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks.
LikeLike
Bring it on! Love that finale.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad you liked it.
LikeLike
Lovely. You hide behind a big bad image but you are a sweetheart. Thanks for sharing your lines.
LikeLiked by 1 person
“You hide behind a big bad image but you are a sweetheart.” Shh! Don’t give me away!
LikeLike
🙊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very beautifully done! I know there is a poet in there!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hiding in plain sight?
LikeLiked by 1 person