FFfAW — The Old Stone Building

A1CC2EB6-C300-41CC-972B-B9AFBBDA8B93I used to stand outside of the old stone building, wondering who lived there and what was going on inside. I never saw people going in or out. Sometimes I would see a silhouette in the small window above side door. But I couldn’t see any features to identify the age or gender of the individual.

I asked around, but no one knew for sure what the purpose of the building was. Some claimed it was home to a reclusive religious sect. Others argued that it was a medical treatment center for the indigent, or a hospice for the terminally ill. Another theory was that it was a secretive government facility that could only be accessed via an elaborate labyrinth of underground tunnels.

It wasn’t until after I was arrested, charged, tried, and found guilty that I learned the truth about the old stone building. That’s when, very late one night, I was escorted, through that same side door that I used to watch, into the hospital for the criminally insane.

(171 words)


Written for Priceless Joy’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Photo credit: Jade M. Wong.

20 thoughts on “FFfAW — The Old Stone Building

    • Fandango October 30, 2018 / 7:25 pm

      It my imagination, but it’s your photo, so you tell me! 🤔

      Liked by 1 person

      • Jade M. Wong October 30, 2018 / 8:10 pm

        Haha the photos are meant to inspire, so it can be the door to anything really! (In reality, this photo was taken at Belvedere Castle in Central Park, NY).

        Liked by 1 person

  1. Sadje October 30, 2018 / 7:12 pm

    Loved the ending. Your last sentence was classic.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Abhijit Ray October 30, 2018 / 10:11 pm

    One has to get arrested to grasp the reality! Nice twist.

    Liked by 1 person

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