Friday Fictioneers — Email Exchange

8F5DCBAF-7302-4C41-9F3A-8ECEDE90B782Hi Babe,

I took this photo outside of our front door. The snow is beautiful, isn’t it? Wish you were here to share it with me and to keep me warm.

Love, Jim

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Jim,

Yes, it looks quite picturesque, but shouldn’t you be asking that personal trainer you had an affair with, rather than me, to keep you warm?

Andrea

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Dear Andrea,

I told you that was a mistake and it’s over. I love and miss you. Won’t you please consider coming home?

Love, Jim

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Jim,

I’d say when hell freezes over, but it looks like it already has.

Andrea

(100 words)


Written for this week’s Friday Fictioneers prompt from Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Photo prompt from Dale Rogerson.

22 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers — Email Exchange

  1. Sight11 February 16, 2018 / 7:11 am

    He’ll or hell. Huh, Sensei? Nice post I wonder if he deliberately did that.

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    • Fandango February 16, 2018 / 7:30 am

      Damn. Should have been “hell.” This time it WAS autocorrect that did me in. Coupled with my failure to proofread. I should hire you to edit all my posts!

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  2. Jelli February 16, 2018 / 11:56 am

    Ouuuu, OUCH! That bit really hard! Great write, love the format!

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    • Dale February 19, 2018 / 9:43 am

      So true. When a friend of ours started looking particularly buff, we thought.. uh-oh…
      …. and were right.

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    • Fandango February 16, 2018 / 3:52 pm

      I don’t think so, but you never know.

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  3. Iain Kelly February 16, 2018 / 2:42 pm

    Jim doesn’t seem to have grasped the enormity of what he’s done wrong!

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    • Fandango February 16, 2018 / 3:53 pm

      I think most people who have extramarital affairs don’t seem to grasp that.

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    • Fandango February 16, 2018 / 7:39 pm

      Thanks. I had fun writing it, so I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. subroto February 18, 2018 / 1:45 am

    Ha! That was a great way to get the last word in. Nice one.

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  5. Dale February 19, 2018 / 9:44 am

    Jim is delusional. Stick to your guns, Andrea. He cheats once, he’ll do it again…

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    • Fandango February 19, 2018 / 10:32 am

      History does tend to repeat itself.

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  6. Norma February 20, 2018 / 6:26 am

    Andrea has asked a good question. It seems the fitness trainer has caught some cold…not that strong, I guess. Don’t come back! Andrea.
    Liked the message format of writing.

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