Hi Babe,
I took this photo outside of our front door. The snow is beautiful, isn’t it? Wish you were here to share it with me and to keep me warm.
Love, Jim
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Jim,
Yes, it looks quite picturesque, but shouldn’t you be asking that personal trainer you had an affair with, rather than me, to keep you warm?
Andrea
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Dear Andrea,
I told you that was a mistake and it’s over. I love and miss you. Won’t you please consider coming home?
Love, Jim
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Jim,
I’d say when hell freezes over, but it looks like it already has.
Andrea
(100 words)
Written for this week’s Friday Fictioneers prompt from Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Photo prompt from Dale Rogerson.
He’ll or hell. Huh, Sensei? Nice post I wonder if he deliberately did that.
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Damn. Should have been “hell.” This time it WAS autocorrect that did me in. Coupled with my failure to proofread. I should hire you to edit all my posts!
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Ouuuu, OUCH! That bit really hard! Great write, love the format!
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Thank you!
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Why does the start of a fitness regimen often mean the end of a marriage?
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Fitness, indeed!
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So true. When a friend of ours started looking particularly buff, we thought.. uh-oh…
…. and were right.
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Looks like Andrea got the house though, Jim needed a better lawyer!
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Does that mean she’s going back? 🙂
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I don’t think so, but you never know.
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Jim doesn’t seem to have grasped the enormity of what he’s done wrong!
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I think most people who have extramarital affairs don’t seem to grasp that.
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Or, as the original Duke used to say, “Sometimes “I’m sorry” doesn’t do it.”
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LOL. Oh, I love that last letter, but the whole exchange is great.
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Thanks. I had fun writing it, so I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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An innovative format and it worked very well.
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The fitness trainer was clearly very fit but fitness isn’t everything! A clever bit of writing YS.
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Ha! That was a great way to get the last word in. Nice one.
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Jim is delusional. Stick to your guns, Andrea. He cheats once, he’ll do it again…
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History does tend to repeat itself.
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Andrea has asked a good question. It seems the fitness trainer has caught some cold…not that strong, I guess. Don’t come back! Andrea.
Liked the message format of writing.
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Thanks, Norma.
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